The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Benji Dude
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Boy finds bottle, boy rubs bottle, genie comes out, genie not happy about having his sleep interrupted, gives boy his powers so he can get back to sleep.  What’s that he sees on the beech?  Three University girls, read on to find out what happens.
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Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3


Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Good stuff, lots of fun!

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

A decent story with unfortunatly very little originality if the reader is at all familiar with Bust Artist's 'Wishful Thinking' comic strip...

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