The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Make a Wish
A man suddenly finds he has the power to grant wishes.
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Some BE, but not the focus of the stories

Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

What a fun story! But it's more of a transformation story than a BE story.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

A few grammer mistakes, but otherwise a very enjoyable story.

Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

A very enjoyable, well written story. Lots of fun, with good characters and imagination. No BE, but a good read and good transformations. Thanks!

Laughing Buddha
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Well put together. Very readable and enjoyable.

Pinto Bean
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Love your light-hearted writing style; I can't stand domination/rape stories. The ethical crisis the protagonist works through is fantastic.

Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Fun to read!! The BE happens mostly behind the scenes, but this isn't just a oney, it's a twoey! This is a lot of good reading that manages to be erotic AND funny in good strokes, and most readers should enjoy it! Hope to see more from the Paladin
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Always did like your stories.

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