The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Bigby Wolfe
Polychrome Pills
Tracy signs up to be a test subject at Biogenetics, Inc. She has to take four pills that are orange, purple, green, and red. Guess what they do.
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benji dude
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

A good story, nicely paced with good discriptions, it's a shame that you didn't say what Tracy did next.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

nice to read

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Not much in the way of descriptions, the changes came fast and had almost no effect on the character besides the way she looked. Maybe the story was too short?

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Fun story, thanks!

Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 4

Everything went by too fast. The changes especially.

Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 2

Could have used more descriptions

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