The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Prederick
Mutations
Adam Tinson, a young college student suddenly finds out he's been "gifted" with special powers to change women's bodies. Oh, and how he can change them. The first in a hopefully continuing story saga.
Average Scores:

mtb
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great tale.. The characters represent people you can identify with.. The complexity and level of detail are absolutely epic. One to remember.

snakewich
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very good story. Describes characters and situations well. Gives hints, but doesn't spell everything out, which adds to the story's strength. It makes the story fast moving and intreaging, it prompts the reader to imagine more, a desireable addtion to the story. The time table of the story is hinted at, which is great, but when a new chapter starts you aren't sure where you are in the time scale. But that isn't really needed. The story could incorporate some additions, like details of Natalie's home life, but it the story is great as is. A great read.

Huge
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I keep coming back to this story, and it always amazes me how perfect it is. Please please PLEASE write some more.

BC
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Absolute genius, one of the best works on the site, hands down.

Darkstorm
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Awesome! one of the best stories I've read for quite some time - can't wait for part 2!

X
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Very well done.

TheObvious
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

You can write. Keep doing so.

Quadhouse
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Please write more of this.

Breasts
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

An enjoyable story. :)
I hope Natalie gets bigger and bigger in the sequel. :)

Cmdr_Mark
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Wow, and incredible read. Some gramatical errors but they were few in number, this really was a great read! Please continue!

Milom
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

You are one hell of a writer, and this is one hell of a story.

andrat2000
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Wow that was a nice reading. I can recommend this story for other people.

Clownboat
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

An EXCELLENT story. You obviously knew what you were writing about. The characters are all very believable and the protagonist kinda reminds me of myself, a poor socially awkward college student but a decent guy nonetheless. The protagonist really treats his power the way any normal person would. If it weren't for the magical BE (nothing wrong with that) it would sound like an autobiography of how a man met his future wife in college.

Banan_Hammock
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

One of the best BE-stories I've ever read, truly amazing...

nobody
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Not much to add to previous reviewers. Two things make this story terrific: the characters, who are well-drawn, and the physical descriptions of all the attractive women the protagonist finds himself surrounded by. An instant classic.

Astrocrepp_5000
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Awesome story write more

Clovis
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Wow, thank you so much for writing this (and hopefully continuing it.) A very simple concept excellently realized. A plot with interesting and well realized characters in a well plotted, well placed story with BE throughout. Simple, yes, but rarely so well done. Thanks again, keep up the good work.

Halfelf
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I thought this was a very well done story. Definately one of my fantasies done in a well written style. Thank you for taking the time to write this and here is to hoping that you will do more.

Phoenyxx
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Great story!

You should definitely write more. My only cirticism, and it's a small one (tiny in fact), is that I personally prefer longer growth scenes with detailed descriptions of the growth.

IowaGuy
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great stuff! I can't wait to see more!

Squirrelkinns
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

YEAH!!! Another writer to join in the ranks of my favorites, not unlike 'Steve Palmer' you may even nudge him out of number one spot. I await, albate droolingly, your next installment.

foobaz
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Instant classic... the best BE story I've read in years. Solid descriptive writing and believable characters combined with some enormous breasts cement this story's place in the BE pantheon. The only quibble was a lack of description of the breast growth itself, since it seems to take place nearly instantaneously. Perhaps the protagonist's newfound control of his powers might rectify the problem...

Kanodin
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very few stories make me identify with the characters like this one. The depth of story and moderation of plot depict an enthralling epic because of my willingness to believe that the people in the story actually exist. Storytelling at its best.

bfan
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

A little bit more BE description and the story is an A++

Mopey
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Possibly the best novella I have read in a long time, regardless of subject matter. I am truly impressed with the talent and originality.
Thank you for sharing your gift with us.

Bejabbers
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

A very enjoyable story overall. It's nice to read a story that deals with what happens after the BE; the personal side of the story. Absolutely wonderful.

jim
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great Story

wmcduff
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Fine erotic story. I'm looking forward to part 2 as well.

DarkHeart
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Wow, just...wow. This is an absolutely wonderful piece of writing, please continue with this level of quality! I'm really hoping to see more work of yours in the near future.

Goku13K
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Terrific, one of the best stories I have ever read!

Twilight
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Definitely one of the best stories I've ever read.....a real pity though, that the BE is (almost) always happening without real description...well, nothing is perfect eh? ;)
Keep up the good work and don't let us wait for part two for too long!

PeterBE
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

A very good story, and one destined for my favorites folder.

Hope you will continue it! If so, I hope we will see the BE scenes made more descriptive, and the forced orgasms and uncontrolled libido developed, instead of just hinted at!

Good stuff!

LL
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Fantastic story. Cant wait for part 2!

bear_chives
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

long buildup, very long, but the payoff is certainly there. Quality of prose and characters way above average.

Zoro
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I know it has been awhile but can we hope for part 2 still yet? A demanding public wishes to know!

The Archivist
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Absolutely superb work. The characters are interesting, the story endearing, and I love how I can see every scene so clearly. I do hope a part 2 comes.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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