Great tale.. The characters represent people you can identify with.. The complexity and level of detail are absolutely epic. One to remember.
Very good story. Describes characters and situations well. Gives hints, but doesn't spell everything out, which adds to the story's strength. It makes the story fast moving and intreaging, it prompts the reader to imagine more, a desireable addtion to the story. The time table of the story is hinted at, which is great, but when a new chapter starts you aren't sure where you are in the time scale. But that isn't really needed. The story could incorporate some additions, like details of Natalie's home life, but it the story is great as is. A great read.
I keep coming back to this story, and it always amazes me how perfect it is. Please please PLEASE write some more.
Absolute genius, one of the best works on the site, hands down.
Awesome! one of the best stories I've read for quite some time - can't wait for part 2!
Very well done.
You can write. Keep doing so.
Please write more of this.
An enjoyable story. :)
I hope Natalie gets bigger and bigger in the sequel. :)
Wow, and incredible read. Some gramatical errors but they were few in number, this really was a great read! Please continue!
You are one hell of a writer, and this is one hell of a story.
Wow that was a nice reading. I can recommend this story for other people.
An EXCELLENT story. You obviously knew what you were writing about. The characters are all very believable and the protagonist kinda reminds me of myself, a poor socially awkward college student but a decent guy nonetheless. The protagonist really treats his power the way any normal person would. If it weren't for the magical BE (nothing wrong with that) it would sound like an autobiography of how a man met his future wife in college.
One of the best BE-stories I've ever read, truly amazing...
Not much to add to previous reviewers. Two things make this story terrific: the characters, who are well-drawn, and the physical descriptions of all the attractive women the protagonist finds himself surrounded by. An instant classic.
Awesome story write more
Wow, thank you so much for writing this (and hopefully continuing it.) A very simple concept excellently realized. A plot with interesting and well realized characters in a well plotted, well placed story with BE throughout. Simple, yes, but rarely so well done. Thanks again, keep up the good work.
I thought this was a very well done story. Definately one of my fantasies done in a well written style. Thank you for taking the time to write this and here is to hoping that you will do more.
You should definitely write more. My only cirticism, and it's a small one (tiny in fact), is that I personally prefer longer growth scenes with detailed descriptions of the growth.
Great stuff! I can't wait to see more!
YEAH!!! Another writer to join in the ranks of my favorites, not unlike 'Steve Palmer' you may even nudge him out of number one spot. I await, albate droolingly, your next installment.
Instant classic... the best BE story I've read in years. Solid descriptive writing and believable characters combined with some enormous breasts cement this story's place in the BE pantheon. The only quibble was a lack of description of the breast growth itself, since it seems to take place nearly instantaneously. Perhaps the protagonist's newfound control of his powers might rectify the problem...
Very few stories make me identify with the characters like this one. The depth of story and moderation of plot depict an enthralling epic because of my willingness to believe that the people in the story actually exist. Storytelling at its best.
A little bit more BE description and the story is an A++
Possibly the best novella I have read in a long time, regardless of subject matter. I am truly impressed with the talent and originality.
Thank you for sharing your gift with us.
A very enjoyable story overall. It's nice to read a story that deals with what happens after the BE; the personal side of the story. Absolutely wonderful.
Fine erotic story. I'm looking forward to part 2 as well.
Wow, just...wow. This is an absolutely wonderful piece of writing, please continue with this level of quality! I'm really hoping to see more work of yours in the near future.
Terrific, one of the best stories I have ever read!
Definitely one of the best stories I've ever read.....a real pity though, that the BE is (almost) always happening without real description...well, nothing is perfect eh? ;)
Keep up the good work and don't let us wait for part two for too long!
A very good story, and one destined for my favorites folder.
Hope you will continue it! If so, I hope we will see the BE scenes made more descriptive, and the forced orgasms and uncontrolled libido developed, instead of just hinted at!
Fantastic story. Cant wait for part 2!
long buildup, very long, but the payoff is certainly there. Quality of prose and characters way above average.
I know it has been awhile but can we hope for part 2 still yet? A demanding public wishes to know!
Absolutely superb work. The characters are interesting, the story endearing, and I love how I can see every scene so clearly. I do hope a part 2 comes.