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The Overflowing Bra

Janet's Milk: The Next Generation
The milky, busty adventures of Erica, Janet's daughter from the story series Janet's Milk.  She has all the powers of her mother only quite a bit more.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Would love to chat if you read this add me :D

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Holy fuck that was amazing. If you're still out there somewhere, please revive this!

Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

I'm guessing you didn't ask the original creator if you could do this. I'll also guess you don't care.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

The Janet's Milk series has previously been written by at least two, if not three, different authors. Also, a continuation has not been released for years. I understand not wanting to step on the toes of an author who has an active story series, but freely adding to a dead work doesn't seem to be a big moral dilema. Nobody is losing anything by having their characters continued in a new story. I haven't even read the story yet, but all 5s to counteract the, once again, completely unfair and ridiculous review that seems so common on this board lately. If I was a conspiracy theorist, I would think someone is intentionally trying to undermine this board by insulting the authors so frequently.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I *did* read the story, and I enjoyed it immensely, even though I thought there could have been a bit more characterization.
I agree with rebuttal. Do you think B.F. Skinner asked permission from Thoreau? The fact that there were few, if any, spelling or grammatical errors in this story makes Infringement's ratings even more unfair. I look forward to seeing more of BigWillieStyle's work.

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

A lot of it was not really my kind of material, but it was well-written nonetheless. I'd like to see what happens next.

Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

My suggestion is to not use the double spacing, makes it hard to read at times, it seemed a little too fluffy and not enough substance. Decent piece in all though.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

An decent continuation of a very good series.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Damn fun story. I found the style easy to read, and well attenuated to what you apparently know the wants of your likely audience to be. Thanks for sharing it with us! :)

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I definetly liked the be sequences, I'm just not shure that the anal with guys is my thing. Great story and development of characters. I look forward to more of the "next generation".

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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