The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

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A woman has a dream about being in a grey place where her breasts are used as a canvas for alien art.
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

Good on the fetish. Writing style is basic, but stick with it. Practice brings improvement. Thank you, I enjoyed it.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

It's a very enjoyable story and certainly creative.

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Inventive idea, pretty well explained. Some clumsiness in word choice and sentence structure.

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