The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Bill Pratt
Act Of Faith (Take 2)
An extremely inhibited high school girl stumbles across a magic remote control and quickly finds herself wondering why her body is tingling and her bra won't fit.
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Just as good this time as it was the first time I read it on another website!

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

I'd like a lil back story to it, like what the cheerleader had done as pranks, but otherwise enjoyable.

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