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Emily, Me and The Device: A Completely True Story, Part Two
Now that they're happily back together, it's time for Matt and Emily to do a little more experimenting with The Sub-Quantum Arousal Energy Redirection Device. Part two of a three-part story.
Average Scores:

nobody
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

A very creditable second part. The story doesn't really advance but there's some hot stuff in here. Next time throw in something new - a new character or situation. But there's not a thing wrong with this one.

IceOwl
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

No real suggestions to make. I think it's going pretty good, and I can't wait for the next part.

s
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This story is amazing! I want MORE!! I cannot wait until part three. Have you written any other stories?

hive
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Two words:
MORE, PLEASE!
'nuff said.

Sere
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Excellently done.

Foxmaster5
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Very good second part. Cant wait for the third to come out.

allinone
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

It could be longer - thats my only suggestion. Well done. I'm waiting for the 3rd part!!

Barton Fink
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

An awesome story, I've really enjoyed it.

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