The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

DeNero
The Girl, The Genie and The Mirror
Average Scores:

Doc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Simply fantastic. Great main characters, great story, great writing. I can't possibly describe how impressed I am at how you managed to keep true to the BE, without throwing in any of the REALLY strange transformations (i.e.: tentacles, shemales, et cetera).

IceOwl
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I love this kind of story, where someone has a power to change themselves and people around them in any way they want to. The difficulty is in carrying it off, which you do very well.

cjpos
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Nice story. I usually shy away when I see ment on the description but this time it for good purposes.

EveryMike
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Good story, I really enjoyed it.

btc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

GREAT STORY! LOVED THE HUMILIATION ELEMENTS AS WELL AS THE TRANSFORMATION.

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