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The Overflowing Bra

Big Boob Spy 007
spocknh@msn.com
The Spy Who Got Me
A unsuspecting guy brings home a big tited women from the club. Little does he know she has has other plans for him then sex.
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DoubleH
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

A joke? MS Word choked on it.

oscine
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

try again...

Anonymous
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Where do I start? In the recycle bin.

katikitten
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

One word - spellcheck! Did you type one-handed? You even mis-spell your mispellings. The premise is interesting, but there's no character development, and you have a weird idea of female anatomy. Could do (much!) better

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