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The Overflowing Bra

Bill Pratt
Ed: Chapter 3
Hey, Ed has finished his research paper and it is time to celebrate! How does wild fantasy sex with his hot former babysitter sound?
Sorry about posting two chapters at the same time, but TOB deserves first crack at it.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Its very nice.

I like how the story is put to gether the Style of writing if you will.

its different and good cause it grabs the readers attention pretty well

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

Looking forward to future installments.
Maybe the author can think of a way for Ed's sister to come to him for BE. If it was her idea it wouldn't wake her up.

How about a return visit by all the women Ed has 'gifted'?

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I really like the Ed series. This chapter is definitely an all time favourite. Not only are the characters well developed, the flow and pace of the writing matches their situation and draws the reader in. I like the snippets where Ed thinks something, or agrees with the ladies in his dreams and inadverdantly changes them.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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