The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Bill Pratt
Ed: Chapter 5
Edís life gets even stranger--and this is before he accidentally eliminates his sisterís romantic rival.
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KaZe
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

BE was a little lacking IMHO but otherwise very enjoyable story. Also, the psychotic Care Bear conspiracy is just hilarious. ;)

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