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The Overflowing Bra

Mihoshi Kuramitsu
Pretty Pregnant Solider Sun Charm Guardian
A new magical girl appears to stop a dark force attacking the city will she be able to stop this enemy with her big belly and breasts? 
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

Entertaining, but it could've used more descriptive BE. It'd make for the first part of a good series.

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