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The Overflowing Bra

Bill Pratt
Ed: Chapter 6
Audrey++ meets Zofia 2.0
Ed vs. Pinky, round 2
Ed puts two and two together and comes up with threeway.
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Keep em coming Bill, great job.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Absolutely Fantastic! This series keeps getting better and better. I love the ever-increasing "Ed Club" - Ed just seems to make his world bustier and lustier every day.
I also hope you can find some way for Ed to kick some Care Bear toochis. Or at least escape alive, and his 'improvements' to the world intact.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

A fun romp - I liked the concept, and the characters seemed more real than many you get in such stories.

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