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The Overflowing Bra

Bill Pratt
Ed: Chapter 11
So Ed is to be removed, eh? OK. Now what? Odds are that he doesn’t want to go.
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Jason G
Overall= 5, BE= 1, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

No real BE in this chapter, but it's another great installment in the Ed series, and it was not missed. There's sure to be plenty more once Ed and the elf.... "sort things out". Keep up the great work, Bill!

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 keeps getting better. This story go to prove that not everything needs to have expanding breasts..most things, but perhaps not everything. I really like the story...and the characters......I'm anxious for the next chapter..again...thanks

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Having read the previous ten installments with great pleasure, I was not let down by part 11. The characters seem to make sensen and the writer gives exactly the right amount of info to remind you of this specific character, while still leaving some to the imagination.

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