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The Overflowing Bra

Bill Pratt
Rumour Mill: Vice Versa: Monday Afternoon

So Mike’s still lying in the hospital, having been screwed unconscious by a Stripper-slash-Import Tuner Show Babe, as the Vice Principal springs his surprise. Can Terry straighten things out in time? Will he even realize in time?

Basically, plot occurs here, so you may want to skip this chapter.

Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Bill Pratt is back at it, and serializing his way through another great storyline concept.
Nothing but omnipotence for Mr. Pratt's characters, I see. (I loved the _Ed's Dreams_ series, and omnipotence was the BE method in that storyline as well)
I also like the thought put into characterization - having good characters really upps the enjoyment for me. Thanks for your continued efforts.

Slight D
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Can't wait for the next bit.

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