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The Overflowing Bra

Bill Pratt
Rumour Mill: Vice Versa: Wednesday Afternoon Part 2/Evening

In the wrap-up for book II of Rumour Mill, itís Danny vs. Mike. Who will you cheer for? What is Mike really up to? What do Terry and Suzy think?

And just what does happen when an exhibitionistic futa-girl works at a strip club?

Average Scores:

Pasta
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

The writing is excellent.

However, at this point there are so many storylines running concurrently that it's nigh impossible to keep track of everything.

If you has just focused on presenting the story from Terry's perspective (1st or 3rd person), I think it would have been one of my favorite stories.

Chase
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Dude, shut the fuck up.

Thanks for your work Bill. Excellent as always. please don't let this jackass get to you.

Hope to see more and please don't forget about the BE!!

Uggh
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Wow, back to a billion more chapters that should have been saved and condensed into one work! Enjoyment or not, its not like these subdays have been appearing over several months. For heaven's sakes, for book III write the whole thing and THEN post it in ONE file. Why would you want your work this spread out anyways?

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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