The Definitive BE Story Archive
The Literary equivalent of fruitcake; incredibly dense, much too sweet, gets passed around a lot, and takes forever to get through..;)
Actually, a 'botched' attempt at a Bearchive challenge. Read that they wanted a story to illustrate, went back, and found just a comic-book-length description. I'm about 21 pages over that.
Victorian setting, and tried to convey the eroticism without having to use all the shopworn words...possibly the only story subitted here not containing the word 'pussy'..;)
Enjoy. checked for spelling, but may have occasional dings..mea culpa
- Overall: 4.88
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.75
- Technical: 4.75
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