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The Overflowing Bra

Bobbie Bazooms
Natalie's Story
Natalie, a proper young lady, is hired as the office manager for Harden Construction Company. She is unaware of the other duties she will be expected to perform.
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Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Comes back as requiring a password for me.

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 2

save it in a file other than a wps file, I had to search for a converter to be able to open it since most people don't have Microsoft Works

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