The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Phoenix
landedphoenix@yahoo.com
Double: Part One
Average Scores:

crorkz
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 2

zP818b I really enjoy the article post.Really thank you!

clib
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I'm loving this so far! Please continue.

gman1
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I agree. Having the girl harbor the inner desire to be huge is very awesome. If you keep us waiting, I'll hunt you down like a dog and......

wowser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I love you.
Mandy

Very Free
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

I agree with the others, but I think that the author should be penalized for leaving us, coitus interruptus, in the middle of the most suspenseful part.

me
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Great! I love how eager she is and look forward to the next part!

cman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Really great story that hits exactly on what makes the genre so exciting. Please continue!

Red
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Terrific story, just great! Can't wait for next chapter.

w00tx100
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Awesome story, look forward to part 2.

Sir Boob
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Good god, man. You cut that story off at the most tantalizing moment possible. Well done, sir. I look forward to the next installment with a drooling mouth.

Breasts
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Pretty good stuff. I look forward to hearing what happens next.

es3ban
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Marred only by a few typos that would have easily been caught with a single proofread, your story is excellent. I look forward to part 2!

Spartacus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very good, very good, I look forward to reading more.

Blamandude
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great! I love when the girl loves it and wants more.

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