The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

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Email story
This is a transcript of an RP/Story between myself and a like minded female via email and as such the 1st and 3rd person isn't always correct and it may jump about a bit but take it as it is and hopefully enjoy it as much as we did. The names have been changed to protect the guilty... or should that be innocent?.... lol
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Raptor
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

you're the first one around to describe the boobs growth in CC, and in thousands and millions CC, that was great! i really liked that story and i hope to see more somilar stories from you in the future!

Anonymous
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 2

Really should have copyedited to fix POV. Or break the story up with dividers to keep straight who is talking. Also, just throwing numbers around doesn't do a whole lot.

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