The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Encounter Bree
Chapter 2 in the ongoing adventure of Matt. Amber keeps her word and sends a friend to see Matt, her name is Bree. Bree takes full advantage of Matts new power and things start growing.
Average Scores:

Benji Dude
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

Good story over all a few typos/ grammar mistakes, can't wait to read more.

Very Free
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2

See Amber for my comments. The shame is that the author didn't read any of the feedback from the first, and make corrections.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

You've definitely improved! Still a little short though :(
I'm looking forward to your next one, hopefully with some more gts in it*g*

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

You've got some great ideas that you've used here. The story is really enjoyable.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Very enjoyable a little more length would be nice, but I know there's more installments.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I LOVE your stories, I am looking forward to the next installment!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

purely amazing and riveting, love the images you include as well

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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