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The Overflowing Bra

Encounter Candice and Danielle
Chapter 3 in the ongoing adventures of Matt. With Bree grown out of control Matt needs help. What perfect timing when Candice shows up.
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

You're quick at writing em, I take back what i said about shortness.

Very Free
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2

These are nearly copies of the Master PC series.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Very nice work. Didn't see the cloning coming at all. I'm interested to see where you go with this from here.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Your writing has become better again ;)
And as long as you're pumping those stories out as fast as you do, I don't really mind the shortness anymore ;)

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

still fuggin awesome!

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