The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Phalus
G.A.L.
This is a story about a female prisoner who must repay her debt to society in the most unusual way as a transformed G.A.L. Note: I am not the original author of this story, this is a reupload of a story that has since been lost on the internet. All credit and copyright belongs to there respective authors.
Average Scores:

JJM
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Good story. I especially like how the transformation seems to be forced, but is actually voluntary (in a way). Forced transformations seem far too "enslaving"... so, nice twist at the end.

razaksroughnecks
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I've liked this one for a long time. You wouldn't happen to have any other stories from the old multi-breast website would you?

tsokei
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Well written and sufficiently sexy but could use much more BE description and content.

Very Free
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I agree with XXXecil, it's good, even though I'm not a fan of B&D. If XXXecil could only remember that it's is a contraction of it is... Lose those fckin' apostrophes!

Kam
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Nice work, it did get a bit repetitive however

XXXecil
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

The only constructive criticism I might offer is a little more detail on the B.E., still - the story fulfills it's cum-drenched, orgiastic purpose. A lusty, busty read.

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