The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

the rabbits
Eleven More
Mary explains how she got her enormous breasts as the story of Eleven continues.
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Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Normally, I'm not one for incest, but you use it well in this story.

Noctus Angelus
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

It's very enjoyable and I look forward to reading more of the adventure. The only thing is that there really isn't any expanding happening in the story, you just get to hear about it after the fact. Other then that Eleven and Eleven More are great. I can't wait for the third one and hope there will be one.

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