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Jeannie Dreams of Me - Part 2
The misadventures of Jennifer continue as the ever-playful Jeannie twists every wish she tries to make into a new experience in pleasure. Includes Parts 1 and 2. 
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Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Great sense of pace! Please continue this series.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Excellent, if a little bizarre at the end there. Looking forward to the next bit.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

I like your work and want to see you wright more.

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