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The Overflowing Bra

Paul Gerard
The Temple Treat Part 3 (A World of Altaerna Story)
Five years after the events of part 2, Saphina the ex-priestess, and Dawnielle aka 5PH-1NX, her former sphinx goddess turned Morphing Alien Robotic Researcher, find themselves pitted against rogue grave robber/archaeologist Belinda "the witch with the whip" Carlyle, possessed by the brain of B1-TCH, the only ‘bot ever to turn psychotic. Will their determination and technology be a match for B1-TCH's thirst for world domination, and the ancient magic poisons that she has now learned to wield...? The last part of the Temple Treat series is a 34.000 words wannabe epic including some more Altaerna universe background, boobs, fedora hats, peril-filled underground mazes, boobs, evil potions, morphing microbots out of control, boobs, explosions and a tearful farewell. And boobs. :)
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Bodacious
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Very nice! One of the most imaginative stories I've read in a loooong time. I hope we see more from you!

wuttha
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

just putting this here because of the all 1s rating...

sum yung gai
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

A worthy end to the saga. Not as much body part description as one could hope for, but it definitely stands on its own as a story, not just whack-off material. I was sad to see the character farewells at the end.

Very Free
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great story of epic proportions. Extra points for technical descriptions during BE. Due to consistencies in locations of errors (very few, BTW), I suspect that this story has more than one author.

elvis interuptus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

loved it

Ameria Loire
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

I love this story and would like to put in on my story blog. "Bigger IS Better" Is there some way I can contact the author to get his permission?

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