The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Bill Pratt
Remake, Part IV
Gerald is having so much fun with nigh-infinite power, but can he survive an encounter with another being rewarded with an alien's gift?
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I must say that this is a refreshing story. The characters aren't unrealistic (at least in personality) and is wrapped up fairly nicely. Only complaint is the mindslave scene was too short. Would have liked him to have to take longer to figure it out. Otherwise, great job.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Oh Bill...You've been neglecting me!!

Bill Pratt
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

My money is on Ben's comment being intended for Greapos' Going Down. Mr. HHH can probably move it without much trouble if it really matters. Thanks for reading, folks.

Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Once again, a winner. I enjoyed how he overwhelmed with lust as opposed to a more "corse" approach. Didn't see any shrinking of any kind, or at least not what I think of as a male shrinking story. Certainly stayed md.

Jason G
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Ben - I didn't see any male shrinking except reversal of MPG. As usual Bill, your imagination is a wonderful place. The story could end here and wouldn't feel like it's leaving you hanging, but also leaves it wide open for more. Great work, as always.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

I hope this isn't the end. Besides that, the overall chapter was very good but their were a few technical difficulties. It was hard keeping track of who was talking in parts of the dialogue towards the end.

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

This said GTS for giantess. This was incorrect and should be removed from the description. This is a Male Shrinking Story and should be labeled as such.

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