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The Overflowing Bra

The Body Shop, p3: The Long Road to Recovery
Ryan is confronted by a past he thought he left and the girl he thought had left him as he tries to regain some control in his life.

NOTE: Parts 1 and 2 of the series, originally uploaded here in .txt format, are included in the zip as .rtf files for more comfortable reading in the much-recommended event that readers refresh their minds with the first two installments.  Frankly, the first two are better than this chapter by far, and the next one is just wierd anyway.  New readers are reminded that the first two are already in the Overflowing Bra archives, and an author search should turn them up toot sweet if you want to post comments or ratings for them.
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Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

good read...could have used an extra proof read for typos (not a big detractor) loved the characters!

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