The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Paul Cullen
Miracle Pills
A teenage girl discovers a miracle of modern science that changes not only her appearance but her whole life. Though the changes eventually get beyond her control.
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

I unanimously agree with everyone here, and I will offer that this does not mean we didn't like nor don't want it to continue....

Best solution for low ratings? A sequel!!!

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

I enjoyed it. I do agree though, slow down and give some description. It feels hurried. I hope to see some more soon!

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

I think the story itself was great!

Very entertaining. Of course, readers who very much enjoy the story would like it to be longer, but I found it to be a nice read.

There was a lack of BE near the end that made me very sad though. I wished that the main character continued to choose to grow larger breasts, but never-the-less thank you very much for writing this wonderful story!


Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Technically competent and shows some promise, but seems to be in a hurry. Slow down and spend a little more time on the details, and you'll be a fine writer.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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