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The Overflowing Bra

Paul Gerard
Yrba’s Travels Pt. 4 - Altars and Virgins
Our medieval fantasy story takes a little time-out from Madame Red’s brothel as diminutive eastern harlot Li takes the embodiment of her busty-and-brawny fetish, bumbling 6’6 giantess Mirca, for a walk in the woods. Their herbs-picking stroll to a derelict temple quickly turns into a very special reenactment of Way Of The Fist that wakes an ancient creature. Later, Charlene and Sylvia find out the hard way that "how much can you take?" is a game best played in open spaces when your plaything is a giantess prone to spontaneous expansion. Unfortunately, they decided to play it in Sylvia’s room... Download contains parts 1-3, too. And maybe some typos, this time. And my usual begging for comments. Sorry!
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Spas
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Wow! What a masterpiece! More please!!

MadMacs2010
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I downloaded this as one item, and now look, you've lured me out of lurking to comment. This story is so well written if it weren't for the kind of bits that the frequenters of this site enjoy, I'd say you had the makings of a good novel here! A very well written story, the tempo and writing style picks up the reader and gently carries them along. I've been a fan of fantasy(the "normal" version) writing for a long time, this has the potential to rate as a sexy parrallel of one of the greats such is the quality of the story. I'm dyign to find out the secret behind the mystery of the amazonian Mirca and I'm so wanting to find out what Yrba's plans for her future and how Mirca features in them are. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next episode, just 1 minor thing, the lack of proof reading did show a bit in this one hence the 4, but then you knew about that one already.

Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Dude, you don't have to beg for comments; these stories are great. I like how u added a little futanari into it as well. I don't mind the girl-on-girl stuff, but is Mirca hooking up with a male anytime soon?

yo
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

I'm enjoying the story so far, keep it up!

Dude
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2

Not much a fan of the story framework, sorry.

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