The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Mich
Erect Desire
The story of Rose, a girl who loves nothing better than breaking innocent boys with no knowledge of sex.  So what happens when she finds out the new boy in her class hasn't had so much as an erection in his 17 years?  As it turns out, lots.
Average Scores:

Orgeston
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

The best story I have ever read on this site! The characters are deep, the BE has great detail and quality, and it has good grammar unlike most of the trash on here (that's saying most of the TRASH, not most of the STORIES).

Someguy80
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Possibly my favorite story on the site! The muscle and fat growth isn't my thing but the main portion of it is amazing!

Q-BE
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

I loved this story. Semen causing BE, FMG, or anything is always a winner in my book. The youth of the characters adds a little substance to the storyline because the characters are learning about their world in the same way as the new experiences are occuring.

Anyway, great story. I'd love a follow-up. You might need to work on how to solve the "huge" problem of when the characters get so enormous. You did decently here, but it's a problem that is very hard to write around. Trust me.

Q-BE

Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

Cool story; it was like an episode of The Twilight Zone, only with nudity and sex!

bobby apples
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great stuff. Please write more.

Gaffenheimer
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Very good story. The descriptions were excellent.

Prophet Tenebrae
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

Hard to say quite why I enjoyed this story as much as I did but it was pretty cool.

Apple
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

My compliments on a great polished story. Please continue your fine art.

G-man001
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Very nice sir. Way to serve many fetishes all at once. Keep up the outstanding work.

MeMyselfI
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I like well written stories. If I story is not well written (like many BE stories), then it must be short for me to tolerate it. This story is longer than the stories I usually read, and its quality is amazing. You are my favorite author on this site and I look forward to your future stories.

Russian Judge
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Good description, good detail. Very impressive.

Babarr
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

You sir are quickly becoming my all time favorite author. Keep up the great work. Good characters, good idea.

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