The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Helia Melonowski
Would You Like To Fly With My Beautiful Balloons Parts 1,2 AND 3!!!
I found the third part of this classic story series. Please send your credit to Helia, if any probs downloading let me know
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I love lighter-than-air inflation. I wish that aspect had been a bit more prominent in this story.

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