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The Overflowing Bra

Sauce for the Gander
This one has a convoluted history. I created another Master PC story, exploring some aspects I didn't think had been addressed. The originator of the series kindly suggested some changes, which I probably didn't get right...;) Still, it's got some breast expansion, some fun, and I thought you guys might like it.

It's another 'what if the girls found the Master PC program?' types. Have fun with it
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 2

Nice review Fun!I agree with all of you that the pidructoon was really bad and cheap. I especially HATED the dinner segment with the male artists. They forgot it was about the girls, the male artists only wanted to have attention. So disgusting! It was all about them which sucks.And the interviews was boring as hell, especially the top 6 interviews. STUPID.However, I liked the opening (until the start to ask the girls questions.. that was so stupid!). And I also liked the swimwear segment. They were the best.All in all, I was almost crying while watching the show.I dont know why ppl think the evening gowns were nice. I think they looked so bad! Especially with the flowers... ugh..#1: looked so much better but still lacks confidence. Liked the hair!#2: Even tho I dont like her I think she did quite well. But winners material?? Dont think so.#3: Poor Amy, that hair! But she did well!#4: I liked Tracy. Top 3 is well deserved imo. Dont like her big smile, but she ca practice it.#5: Is this Cookies???#6: My favorite girl was way too nervous. But she was still the prettiest of them all. Wanted to see her in Miss International!#7: She was one of my favs but photogenic!?! NO WAY! -_-"#8: She was strong even tho she looked a bit tired. Should be placed top 3.#9: I liked her in the finals! To bad she was paired with Edwin Siu because he kept talking and talking..#10: Very avarage. Shouldnt made top 6 to begin with.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

This story is fantastic!
It's hard to do a Master PC story right sometimes, but you did it well!

Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Very nice, interesting twist!

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Nice. You don't get many romantic MasterPC stories.

Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

My only complaint is this was too short!

Encore! Encore!

Russian Judge
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I loved the story. I'm also glad that Master PC has fallen into the hands of women, rather than just being something men operated. There are too many stories that assume that women must be manipulated into being sexy. Here, having some of the "users" being "used" helped the story a lot. My only complaint; the girls should have used Master PC to improve the lives, and of course the breasts, of others on campus.

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