The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

pakled
pakled05@hotmail.com
Sauce for the Gander
This one has a convoluted history. I created another Master PC story, exploring some aspects I didn't think had been addressed. The originator of the series kindly suggested some changes, which I probably didn't get right...;) Still, it's got some breast expansion, some fun, and I thought you guys might like it. It's another 'what if the girls found the Master PC program?' types. Have fun with it
Average Scores:

GODofMOUSSE
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

This story is fantastic!
It's hard to do a Master PC story right sometimes, but you did it well!

Dngnmastr
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Very nice, interesting twist!

Adama
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Nice. You don't get many romantic MasterPC stories.

Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

My only complaint is this was too short!

Encore! Encore!

Russian Judge
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I loved the story. I'm also glad that Master PC has fallen into the hands of women, rather than just being something men operated. There are too many stories that assume that women must be manipulated into being sexy. Here, having some of the "users" being "used" helped the story a lot. My only complaint; the girls should have used Master PC to improve the lives, and of course the breasts, of others on campus.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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