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The Overflowing Bra

Paul Gerard
Yrba’s Travels Pt. 7 - Among Wolves (World of Altaerna, 1200)
(Previous parts included. Usual whine, too: Comment. Please...) - Part 7 - Among Wolves: Yrba the witch and Mirca the lumberjack girl travel the country roads of the northlands as winter looms, and a well-meaning plan almost leads to swelling disaster. And as the couple sets up camp for the worst of winter, something else happens that some readers have long been waiting for ;)
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Very enjoyable. Sometimes I thought the cuts between descriptions or thoughts were a little hard to follow, but it was still a wonderful work. The story is creative and imaginative and engaging. More please!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

WORTH THE WAIT! From the milking scene, to the sex in the end, I was extremely pleased by this part of the story!!

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