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The Overflowing Bra

Paul Gerard
Yrba’s Travels Pt. 8 – The Living Cauldron (World of Altaerna, 1200)
(Previous parts included.) The winter and its weird dreams are over, and as spring returns and the roads open up again, Mirca the lumberjack girl and Yrba the gypsy witch prepare to continue with their travels, but not until the witch makes good on her promise to Alric the bard, their winter boy toy. Yrba sets out to brew a new batch of her special potion, and Mirca, her clumsy, oversized Amazonian pupil, turns out to be just the right girl in the right place at the right time for a witch stuck with a tincture-teeming, bloated belly. (How’s that for a change?)
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Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

2 examples:1) Edison inenetvd the electric light bulb, using a carbonized cotton fiber. Innovation im[proved the bulb to one using a coiled wire made of tungsten.2) Henry Ford did not invent the automobile. The innovation was in his use of a production line to MAKE the automobile.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Another perfect story! Just the thought of a naked Yrba with her chocolate skin and her big belly/third tit is enough to drive me wild. I especially loved the opening scenes, though I noticed that you seem to be missing your chapter numbers.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I've been following this story from the start but never reviewed it, so I thought this is a good time to. I really like the characters and normally I don't like women taller than me, Mirca just gets sexier every time.

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