The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Potzi Hookman
A Loving Expansion
This is a story I wrote years ago, found it gathering dust on an old HD backup, figured I'd throw it up here. ...And yes it's furry. It was originally written for submitting on a furry site. As far as I know I haven't seen anything against furry submissions here. Anyway it's a story of myself and a very good friend of mine going through some expansion shenanigans. Hope it's readable and any feedback is always appreciated. P.S. It's a part 1, because I wanted to expand on the concept later, but haven't had much of a chance
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Donut
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Great story, I would love to see more!

Pleasure4you
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I liked it a lot !

geddon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

well written and executed. felt like an actual story and would love to see more.

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