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The Overflowing Bra

Paul Gerard
Yrba’s Travels Pt. 9 - The Tower (World of Altaerna, 1200)
Mirca the amazonian lumberjack girl becomes a reluctant farm boy’s teacher before the travelers’ quest finally ends at Ramec the wizard’s tower. The cold and the rain take their toll on Yrba the witch and send her into a bizarre milk-drenched nightmare. Come next morning, Yrba’s former mentor reluctantly reveals some answers for Mirca’s condition, but at what price? Things get out of hand as hidden agendas come into play. Yrba finds herself strapped to a laboratory table and Mirca ends up a brainless slave. Who will make it, and who won’t, in this dark final part of the second book? (Previous parts included)
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Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

يجب ان لا نتسرع. لن نعرف حتى تصدر الاصدارة النهائية.اذا كانت تستخدم واجهة جنوم ستستخدم 2.32.فهذا يعني أنها لن تستخدم برامج جنوم باصدارها3. مثل nautilus; totem; gedit.على الأغلب. شيء مؤسف.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This story's coming full circle, I can feel it! Your disclaimers are becoming mildly superfluous, because your writing's that good!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Well paced. Arousing. Fascinating background. Great characters.

Keep up the great work.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

great story!

Ninja In The Night
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I've loved this series, but such a shame it has to come to an end. Wonderfully written... character development and everything... jeez...

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Had to stop in and tell you, very very good stuff. Sex aside, amazingly well written. And hopefully your writing extends beyond overflowingbra (or any erotic fiction, really). You know how to craft a story and I look forward to reading more from you.

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