The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Big Kahuna
The Peripheral Cocksucker: Book III
The third book in the trilogy finds Jake’s worst fears coming true when one of his fembots suffers a breakdown, new abilities manifest themselves, and psychotic behavior begins running rampant.  But then who ever said cyborg ownership is easy?
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Goddamn, that was tense. Seriously, I downloaded this onto my phone and couldn't resist reading whenever I had the free time. I have so much to check in the internet now.

I mean, the thing just metaphorically grabbed me by the face, and pushed my head into its warm gigantic bosom, where it familiarized me with the magical cleavage pixies that made it so awesome.

...still could use more rampant BE. As in the locker-room scene was begging for some breast size comparisons.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Completely fantastic - had some confusing parts towards the end with the body-switching and clone-production, but other than that totally great. I liked how Eve became the villain. I didn't expect it but after remembering her manipulation of Jake and Ashiko it all fit.

Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Got a little confusion towards the end, but I enjoyed it nonetheless.

Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Well the BE was lacking but this was still a fantastic story.

Anonymous Coward
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I was expecting to wait a year for this story, what a pleasent surprise to see it uploaded! I love your work, please keep it up!!!!

Elvis Interruptus
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

According to some traditions Lilith (Adams first wife) invented the blow job. That is why she was replaced by Eve--either that or for wanting to be on top.

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