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Sanctuary in the Sands: Parts 1-3
Now in HTML format, this contains all parts of my One Piece fanfiction 'Sanctuary in the Sand', up to the brand new Chapter 3, where Robin and Vivi finally meet up with the Straw Hat pirates.

Bit of a download, as it contains pictures. I'll upload a lighter version if there's any call for it.
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Above Ground Swimming Pools
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

It's straight to the point! You could not tell in other words! :D

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Pretty impressive command of English grammar you have there; I am usually quite skeptical of fanfics. With a slight knowledge of One Piece, I found your story to be quite enjoyable and creative (I don't know if I would enjoy it more or less if I read One Piece...)
There wasn't overmuch BE, but as a whole the story was very enjoyable.

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