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The Overflowing Bra

Paul Gerard
Yrba’s Travels Pt. 12 - Eruption (World of Altaerna, 1200)
Yrba the Darkskin witch returns to Ebron shire to check on Mirca, her former pupil turned queen and goddess, only to find the palace deserted — save for a couple of starved and desperate maidservants willing to try anything for food. And things take a turn for the worse when the witch stumbles on a fiendish, milk-driven plot for dominance and finds her former lover in a much too tight place ...
(Pt. 12 of 12, previous parts included)
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

What a great end to a great series! For the sake of those who haven't read the story, but are reading the comments, I won't say much, only that the ending does NOT lack in finality or satisfaction in any way. Should we be looking forward to more stories from Altaerna?

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

'mazing yarn these are, mate.

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