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The Overflowing Bra

The Editor - Part 1 - Blackbird
Blackbird, a comic book superheroine, meets her match and so much more when the mysterious, reality-controlling Editor lures her into a trap.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Wonderful story!! I loved it! Yes, its what some would call simple smut, but I liked the characters too! There's not enough quality penis expansion (that I have ever been able to find) out there and Im always thrilled when a writer adds it in and does it so perfectly as you did. Im an expansion fan of both male and female bits and parts, and this was awesome! Please please please write the next chapter. If not for the not so enthused raters, then for me?!

Roid Abuser
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

I enjoyed the growth and descriptions very much; the story, however, lacked tension -- the guy is a demi-god.

No outside tension of competing editors, no internal struggle of morality, little discovery of powers, etc.

bear chives
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

enjoyed the story pretty well.

not a comment on that, but 'sc' is when the woman controls the growth of her own breasts. this is definitely an 'rc' story. :P

re the previous review, if you're not interested in male domination or rape fantasy, that's fine, but people who do don't need to make "excuses" for it. it's FANTASY. if it's not your fantasy, then find another story and read that one.

Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 3

If you happen to be in the mood for a flimsily writer-excused rape fantasy/male powertrip, this is for you. If you're not...

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

this storie is one of the best i,ve read in a long time. you have got breast growth,penis growth,and unlemmited size for both.
I do hope there will be more.

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

One word, three letters: MEH

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