The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Paul Gerard
The Complete PDF Of Yrba’s Travels (World of Altaerna, 1200)
What starts out as a chance meeting of two women in a castle dungeon, only hours from their scheduled execution, soon balloons into a tale of golden-hearted whores, an exiled warrior queen, a mysterious living statue, a traveling bard, wolves in winter forests, a mischievous wizard, an upstarting vizier and a deserted throne. Can Yrba, the curvy dark-skinned traveling witch and castaway of the Southern Islands, bring a happy-ever-after to Mirca, her hapless six feet six and growing Amazon look-alike protege who’s blessed with much more muscle than experience? Find out in this conveniently formatted and indexed 800+ pages PDF of the original 12-part series!
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Average Joe
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Thank you for this story. A fetish tale that had me actually care about the characters and still get me all riled up. You somehow managed to keep the BE parts fresh through the length of it. Great job.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

What did you have a space 5 min to write this story - I mean no disrespect here. The main characters were given life & stayed true to form. As a lover of happy endings you made my day & giving just deserts to those that need a lesson. Well done however the reader digest version next time - joking again - couldnt help myself.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Your production of this work has been fantastic. The characters have personality, the relationships develop/change, and the variety and changes of setting help to keep the work from becoming a garden-variety work. I certainly encourage your production!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very well written, and easy to follow!!!!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

It'll be a while before I work through most of this, but it's quite a nice thing to have waiting for me!

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