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The Overflowing Bra

pakled
pakled05@hotmail.com
Spheres of Sarissa Part 4
Whoa, Nelly. 190 odd pages. It's time to put this puppy to bed. This is the final (no, really this time...;) forth part of the two-part series. It's gone from a simple idea about BE to a novel where everyone just happens to get laid...;) There's some BE here, but it's not fair to HHH and the others to call it a BE story as much, so once again, the ~ is your friend. I've got to cut back some, this was getting out of hand. It's time for other people to have a shot (thought anyone could post something any time, and I like reading 'em as much as I like writing 'em...;) I'm not going to stop, but it will probably be about June before I can pick up again. And I'm out of ideas at the moment. Still, it's been fun, have fun, and I'll be lurking around out there. Thanks to all.
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pakled
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Sight...that's fourth, and though, and other stuff.

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