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The Overflowing Bra

Paul Gerard
Connie’s Weed, Part 2 (World of Altaerna, 2011)
Part 2 of 4, "Standing On The Bosoms Of Giants" - Chapters 5 and 6: Meek magic-wielding Connie gets a nightmarish glimpse of what may be in store for her while her spunky and recently-accidentally-turned-buxom BFF Marge devises her own plans for the shy girl who holds power over her body. And does she ever have big plans ...
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

5 for anything gts!

Very descriptive, also!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Loved the details, loved the writing. Fantastic job!

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5


Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

good story. She had a nightmare about lossing control of the power and that can happen maybe not like that but still.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'm not really into the giantess thing, but I really enjoy the characters. I can't wait for the next installment!

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

The story keeps improving, and your writing is what fuels it (not just the general content). I definitely look forward to the next release and where you choose to take the characters.

Alex Kiss
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

It just keeps getting better.. can't wait to see the next chapter!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Well written and best of all, it's unique. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

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