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The Overflowing Bra

Paul Gerard
Connie’s Weed, Part 3 (World of Altaerna, 2011)
Part 3 of 4, "Two Much By Far" - Chapters 7 to 10: Connie tries to find a way out of her predicament, keeping the real amount of remaining transformative juice a secret from ever-greedy Marge. However, when an impromptu make-out session gets out of hand, she is forced to reveal the truth. Soon, Connie is in over her head, struggling between lust and responsibility while the last supply of the juice dwindles and Marge rises to dubious fame...
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Awesome as always

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

A great installment in the series. It was a bit confusing to understand the restroom expansion at times, but that same confusion also lent itself to the frantic nature of the situation.

Definitely curious where the 4th installment goes, as it would appear as though this has wrapped up much of the existing plot.

Alex Kiss
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I can't wait for the last part! I don't know what you're talking about in terms of not having a good grasp of the English language, though. Your writing is miles better than about 75% of the authors posting here.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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