The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

High Priest of Dagon
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

its a good story but not a great one. but the author has potential

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Interesting story. I would have liked more description of each breast growth sequence. You should have them drink individually, and extend the story.

The names while original were a little too difficult for me. Keep at it.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

I look forward to more stories in the impending strange eons.

muscle god
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

I'd love to see a sequel

Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 1

Is the author a Jejemon? fix the title.. correct the spelling.. lol..
- Jejebusters

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I'm kind of disappointed that this story ended. It was too short and stopped right at the exciting parts. I just hope that there is more to come from this tale.

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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