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The Editor - Part 2
The Editor moves to Megalopolis to add the powerful Ultress to his harem, but events quickly spiral out of his control, and he learns the consequences of his actions. Some violence, lots of buildup, then lots of sex and growth at the end. Enjoy!
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I liked it very much !
Please continue...

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Really liked this story a lot as a follow up to the original. Would have liked a little more description on the growth scene(s). Overall a really well done story!

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I like the double turnabout in the plot. Takes it away from the standard evil mind-controller story (which is where part 1 seemed to be heading) and makes it more likable.

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