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The Overflowing Bra

High Priest of Dagon
The Goddess of the Forrest
Conan the Barbarian has heard of a magic sword which will make him invincible, but can he survive the test of the fertile forest goddess who guards it jealously?
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3

It's spelled "Forest".

Well done otherwise, though. No read depth, but that's not what you're looking for in a story like this. Perhaps slow down a little?

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Awersome story.

Captures the pulp era quite well.

Keep up the great work!

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Robert E Howard would be proud!

Some minor misspellings, and a bit more descriptions of the Be would have been nice. But as a nice nod to the pulp era masters, it was very well done.

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Like the writing style and plot but there wasn't quite enough description of the actual BE or pregnancy.

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