The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

High Priest of Dagon
The Tithe of the Tribe
This is a quick story for you guys, concerning the fate of a shipwrecked sailor. Enjoy!
Average Scores:

Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 1

The grammar was awful, and the story was rather nonexistent.

Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2

It was not good.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Short & very sweet!

Your BE descriptions are getting better.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Short but enjoyable. I have always liked the idea of breast milk triggering TG.

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